An increasing number of people are buying what they need online What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online

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An increasing number of people are buying what they need online? What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online?

Never has online shopping been so rife among people compared to the near past. While e-commerce is convenient for both customers and enterprises, it has several drawbacks as well.

Individuals need extra time to work on their skills required in this competitive world so e-trading is the solution. Precisely, instead of going to traditional trading centers, people can stay at home enhancing their skills such as computer literacy, earn additional hours not only for their work but also for their families along with purchasing what they need online. Additionally, purchasing products over the internet saves people’s lives since humanity is facing Covid-19 pandemic causing hundreds of thousands of casualties. As long as conventional markets are considered to be outbreaks of lethal diseases or viruses, the e-trade is currently beneficial and will be optimal in the long run. More captivating feature of this big deal is that internet stores are being viewed as substantial profit makers. For example, the more people stay at home, the more online shopping takes place, which is why businesses, including Amazon, Alibaba, or AliExpress, have a vast amount of revenue these days. Furthermore, this mode of shopping reduces the cost of products sold in shopping malls as companies no longer need cashiers and sales assistants earning a monthly salary.

Although there are positives of shopping via the internet, negatives are more severe because society is not ready. Firstly, people are put at risk of being offended by hackers when they are paying via credit cards. If authorities and companies do not make online trading secure, individuals continue to suffer from fraudulent websites that copy the pages from original e-commerce sites. Secondly, A myriad of people are likely to lose their jobs or income owing to automation in interned-based shops. To be more specific, this business approach does not require a large area for trading where different jobs like cleaning services, security, vendors, or even cashiers are handed out. Moreover, in case the number of customers of one particular website increases, the company will be unable to deliver the goods on time or fake products will be sold so as to meet the demand.

In conclusion, notwithstanding shopping online has a significant role in satisfying both the needs of individuals and companies discussed above, it demolishes people’s rights on some occasions ranging from redundancy and digital money safety to inferior quality products plus late delivery.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 850, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...s on time or fake products will be sold so as to meet the demand. In conclusion, no...
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Line 5, column 876, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... will be sold so as to meet the demand. In conclusion, notwithstanding shopping ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2136.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 398.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36683417085 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83059577075 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620603015075 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 677.7 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3481088857 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.5 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.875 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1875 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259960220383 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719820686692 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054290234102 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163514954487 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026321108542 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 78.4519038076 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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