An increasing number of people are buying what they need online what are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online

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An increasing number of people are buying what they need online.
what are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online ?

In today's era, the internet is dominating the world as everyone is adopting online culture for their businesses. This wave of internet has also affected the shopping style. Now, there are plethora of shopping websites where people are doing online shopping. Everything has two faces which means online shopping has advantages and disadvantages as well for both buyers and companies that are selling their products online.

Firstly, the advantages for the customers doing online shopping over internet is that it’s very convenient to them. Moreover, the individuals can explore all brands under one online platform. Furthermore, people can get their favourite, own-wished things to their doorsteps by home-delivery. Some websites also offer free home delivery and easy return policies to attract customers. Whereas, the companies also shifting most of their business online because of increasing popularity in online shopping. They are also getting more profit from this emerging era of shopping because companies can sell all their products online which leads to decrease the expense of their mortgages and it will reduce expense of excessive manpower as well.

On the contrary, the negative impact of online shopping is hitting both customers as well as the companies. The disadvantage for buyers is trust issues over the shopping websites is rising nowadays due to some recent incidents, there was news coming last year that one person from India ordered a mobile phone from the well-known online shopping website but what he got in the box was four number of pieces of rock inside the mobile phone box. This is not only one news of likewise incident but this news got viral last year. Whereas in case of companies, their competition is getting increased getting day by day in owe to rise in online shopping which leads to more sales need to give to the customers.

In conclusion, the advantages of online shopping are having upper hand over the disadvantages of it for both individuals as well as the companies in my opinion. Also, it depends upon the individual preferences of shopping style. In the end, I would like to say that we cannot ignore the fact that the online shopping is getting more popular now days.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, likewise, moreover, so, well, whereas, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1868.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13186813187 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6368188542 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513736263736 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.9 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.5043507505 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.882352941 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4117647059 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23529411765 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386726487144 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126217606357 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841543998936 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247974800267 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347803022759 0.056905535591 61% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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