Some people think that government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?
It is believed that spending money on the arts is not useful and it should be invested elsewhere. I completely disagree with this notion and feel that arts are worth of every single penny that is spending on it.
First of all , arts are considered as a national interest in some countries where governments have made various kind of organizations for preserving the different kinds of arts. For example :- Countries like USA, Canada, Australia have plethora of art museums all over the country where people can visit free of cost .The cost of maintenance is all handled by the government. Moreover , this increases the level of interest over the people. Thus , the government puts an inconsiderable effort to preserve the arts in the various form i.e. art museums , exhibitions etc.
Secondly , arts are considered as the form of enterainment by several people in the country , For instance , movies , craft exhibitions etc are derived from arts. Movies are considered very lucrative and there is film industry for every language like Hollywood for english , Bollywood for Hindi , Pollywood for Punjabi etc . Whereas , the craft exhibitions depicts various kind of paintings such as oil painting , glass paintings and many more .
Encouragements for arts from the government improves the livelihood for thousands of people who base their carriers in arts . This proves beneficial for both the people who work on arts and who enjoy the arts.
To conclude , since arts plays an vital role in the lives of people . So , it is very improtant for the government to make sure that the fanicial aid providing in the various kind of forms such as art museums , craft exhibitions , movies etc. is propered.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10469314079 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79761942982 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537906137184 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9420582643 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.769230769 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167162576842 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682730942064 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475973932359 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108569636167 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579373951441 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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