An increasing number of people are buying what they need online What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online

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An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online?

The past few decades have witnessed an unprecedented increase in the number of people finding the items which they need online and buying them without going out of their home. In this essay, an attempt will be made to discuss the benefits and drawbacks of this phenomenon.
To begin with, the first advantage of buying items online is that the purchaser can save their time. This is because they don’t have to move from this shop to another to select the objects which are suited to them. In addition, they just need to stay at home, surf the Internet shopping website and find the item and compare it with others on other websites to make final decision. Another merit which has to be mentioned is that they do not have to go out of their home. That is very essential in Covid19 situation because it can eliminate the direct contact among people, which effectively prevents this virus from attacking people. According to statistics published recently in Vietnam, online shopping reduces the great amount of people infected by this disease. Therefore, buying online certainly has a positive impact on our society.
However, on the other hand, there are also some obvious disadvantages of this phenomenon. It is common to see that people purchasing online are cheated by online shops. To put it another way, they sometimes buy wrong items, which are low-quality or different in size which they require and so on. These products are not as good as they expected. Take my sister as an example. Last week, she bought a dress, which looks quite beautiful and attractive in the picture of this shop. She decided to buy it after being given advice about size and material from the shop’s staff. Subsequently, when trying it on, she was upset a lot because it was too tight for her to wear. Consequently, it is clear that shopping online also has negative aspects.
In conclusion, this phenomenon could bring about certain benefits, but its negative consequences should not be overlooked.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: different
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, look, so, therefore, as to, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89349112426 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5418041192 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58875739645 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0491176563 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0526315789 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7894736842 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26222689324 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806463046173 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679434947526 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148323713748 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0870922856928 0.056905535591 153% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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