Some people argue job satisfaction is more important than job security. Others believe a permanent job is more important. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In today’s world, there is a public debate related to job satisfaction and job security. Some people are of the view that job satisfaction is more essential than job security. In the meantime, others share the view that the permanence of the job is more integral compared to job satisfaction. Both of the views have their own merits which require careful consideration.
To begin with, some people advocate that job satisfaction is more important than job security. The most frequent factor contributing to this view is that life turns meaningless once no job satisfaction is obtained. This is demonstrated by the following examples. According to a Near researcher in 1984, job satisfaction is a component of life satisfaction, job satisfaction predicts life satisfaction over the same period of time. Moreover, Diener and Tay in 2012 illustrated that job satisfaction is a key indicator of workers’ well-being. For these reasons, job satisfaction is more necessary in comparison with job security because of its influence on life quality.
On the other hand, some people argue that job security is more essential than job satisfaction. One explanation to support this view is that in this day and age, people all over the world have to face up with the risk of losing their jobs due to the outbreak of infectious diseases. According to the USA Today, in COVID-19 situation, there were 20.6 million job losses IEL, meaning 18 million are expected to be temporary when the pandemic recedes. In fact, there is no guarantee for citizens about their work after COVID-19 disease period. Therefore, it is apparent that in this case, a permanent job is more vital than job satisfaction.
Take everything into consideration, it may be concluded that both job satisfaction and job security bring their particular benefits which cannot be denied. However, from my perspective, I am of the view that job security is more imperative compared to job satisfaction because of its actual need in the infectious disease situation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: period
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, in fact, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1692.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14285714286 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08535642151 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495440729483 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3376909413 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5294117647 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3529411765 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58823529412 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.530990418941 0.244688304435 217% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.213141193596 0.084324248473 253% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143626571826 0.0667982634062 215% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.367785419144 0.151304729494 243% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700156457437 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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