Some people think healthcare should be free for everyone. Others think that people should pay for their medical costs themselves. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Most governments are showing great concern about healthcare services' costs. When this issue comes into view, there exist many conflicting opinions. Some people share the belief that citizens should pay for healthcare fees by themselves. Meanwhile, others are of the view that medical services should be free for everyone. Both views have their own merits which require careful consideration.
To begin with, it is undeniable that the cost of healthcare services is fairly high. Therefore, the service of health treatment is unaffordable for the poor. This is demonstrated by the following statistics. According to the 2017 Global Monitoring Report published in Lancet Global Health, 800 million people spend at least 10 per cent of their household budgets on health expenses for themselves or other family members. In addition, for almost 100 million people these expenses are high enough to push them into extreme poverty. For that reason, if health treatment is free, many poor people will have a chance to improve their health as well as their quality of life.
On the other hand, those who are in favour of paying for healthcare individually have reasons that can not be ignored. In this day and age, it is a well-established fact that with the development of technology, people tend to set higher requirements for their medical treatment. To be more specific, they demand advanced facilities and newer procedures in order to have better care. Nevertheless, the expense of upgrading new facilities and drugs is really expensive. For that reason, if people do not pay for all the updating, the government need to pay for all the updating, which will push the government to the edge of running out of the national budget. Hence, it is infeasible for government to provide free medical treatment for their citizens.
Taking into consideration both these sets of arguments, free healthcare service has both benefits and drawbacks. However, from my perspective, people should personally pay for their medical services due to the burden financial of the government.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, nevertheless, really, so, therefore, well, while, at least, in addition, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84893746763 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569277108434 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.7780708293 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7368421053 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4736842105 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21052631579 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.415843535806 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126592061574 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.097730393206 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270310219787 0.151304729494 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545545664445 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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