Nowadays, we can see definite sign of surplus production in almost every industry sector and thus is leading to environmental damage. What are the some possible solution to this situation?
In today’s world, it is manifest that there are a multitude of signs of excessive production in almost industrial sectors. Therefore, it results in exacerbating the environmental situation. In this essay, an attempt will be made to investigate the factors contributing to this phenomenon and also put forward the solutions to deal with this problem.
To begin with, the most frequent reason making a contribution to this situation is that industrial production causes the depletion of natural resources. To put it in another way, the vast majority of the resources required to produce industrial goods are from nature. One example to demonstrate this view is that a new study published in Nature indicates that nowadays there are 15.3 billion trees chopped down every year to provide materials to manufacture wooden merchandises. As this example reveals, it is undisputed that industrial production brings a negative impact on the environment.
Having identified the root of the problem, a good remedy to cope with this position is making some changes in production. To rephrase it, the government should invest more in investigating the eco-friendly stuffs which can replace timber to protect the environment. For instance, hemp is a feasible wood alternative. This is because it is not only less expensive but also much faster growing than wood. Moreover, according to the statistics of Nature, every hemp plant could save 12 trees. As a result, hemp may be used as an alternative for timber to reduce the trees cut down annually for industrial production purpose.
Given the aforementioned points, it cannot be denied that the drawback of the industrial manufacture related to environment could be tackled by looking into the replacement for the environmentally-friendly stuffs.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36524822695 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26725088163 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602836879433 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2319462833 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.071428571 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222531697516 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700236418839 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465429408539 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126010579373 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558970794743 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.