With an increasing number of people eating fast food, which if eating regularly can cause health issues, some people think that the only solution is to ban it completely. To what extent do you agree?
Today, fast food is increasingly popular because the number of people using it more and more every day. Despite its meager benefits, this food seems to be causing a lot of health problems for consumers. Some people have come up with the only solution to this problem is to completely stop its production. In my opinion, I do not fully agree with this opinion because of the reasons below.
First of all, if banning fast food completely, it will cause a number of social problems that affect a lot for consumers. Recently, in addition to fast food products sold on the roadside, there are also products that have become branded and advertised like Mc Donald, Lotteria everywhere and this is also the reason why people use it more and more. If we stop this food, people will have to buy it at a much higher price leading to illegal trade. From the problem above, we should have more suitable methods to solve this problem.
In order to reduce the consumption of fast food, it is necessary to increase people's awareness of the harmful effects it causes to health. In modern life, people are often quite busy making a living and have almost no time for cooking so fast food is a perfect choice with cheap price and time saving. Therefore, providing them with information about the harmful effects of this food is essential to help them limit their consumption of this food and eat healthier foods.
In short, it is difficult to completely ban fast food. We should limit our use and look for information about the negative effects of fast food to propagate to family and friends as well as promote them to use healthy foods every day to limit health problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, so, therefore, well, in addition, in short, as well as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58703071672 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33289869811 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505119453925 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 293.0 20.2975951904 1444% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1344.0 106.682146367 1260% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 293.0 20.7667163134 1411% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 106.0 7.06120827912 1501% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282761460192 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.282761460192 0.084324248473 335% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18063783591 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558836008357 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 146.7 13.0946893788 1120% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -217.46 50.2224549098 -433% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 116.4 11.3001002004 1030% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.82 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 21.03 8.58950901804 245% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 9.78957915832 552% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 119.2 10.1190380762 1178% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 147.0 10.7795591182 1364% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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