The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the Internet and what solutions can you suggest?
It is true that aside from the positive impacts in information transmission and communication, it also leads to unanticipated new problems for modern society that were not prevalent in earlier generations. There are many reasons behind this view and several solutions should be adopted by government to improve this situation.
One serious problem of the advancement of computer science is risk of information insecurity. In the context of information technology, cyber criminals and hackers create malicious software such as computer sworn or spam with unsafe link to defraud and misappropriate important personal and business information. For instance, hackers attacked UK airline websites and mobile apps, taking personal information and financial data of 380,000 customers. This is because users are less concerned with security issues and use insecure apps and features like social networks, malware.
Fortunately, I believe that awareness raising and security system upgrade could be taken to alleviate the problem. To deal with cyber criminals, the governments should be responsible for investing more in highly reliable security systems that protect the security of users' information especially companies and enterprises. Besides, cyber security policies and laws should be strongly enforced by countries to raising awareness of protecting personal information of citizens and punish cybercriminals. The US has been looking at Chinese economic sanctions against Chinese companies and individuals benefited from cyberattacks that steal American trade secrets.
In short, although the development of the internet can create information security problems, these can be coped with security system promotion and user self-protection sense. However, a joint effort by the government and the whole community can completely solve this problem and restrict network security crisis.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ers information especially companies and enterprises. Besides, cyber security pol...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, look, so, for instance, in short, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.93382352941 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07475172711 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639705882353 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1012751994 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.5 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158523866594 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593395911271 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046354923236 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999414248129 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409800632746 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.77 50.2224549098 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.41 12.4159519038 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.42 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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