An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems do this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation?
It is true that there is an upward trend towards experts from poorer countries such as doctors and teachers leaving their career and going to developed countries to work. Although there will undoubtedly some negative consequences, some, societies can take steps to mitigate these potential problems.
As there is a significant rise in professionals leaving their countries, several related problems can be anticipated. The major issue is that the situations of brain drain would happen, resulting in a lack of professionals in the developing countries in many important aspects. For example, if a developing country lack of well-qualified doctors, inhabitants with nasty diseases have to go abroad to cure their diseases. Moreover, when all professional teachers pursuit their careers in other developed countries, it will definitely lead to a dramatic decline in sharp students in their countries. These phenomenal will exert pernicious impacts upon the growth speed of developing countries’ economy.
There are several actions that authorities could take to solve the problem mentioned above. In fact, governments should make their salaries equivalent to their paid in other countries in order to stop brain drain. Another solution is that enough infrastructure and job opportunities should be fully supplied with a view to creating working environment. Authorities in Vietnam, for instance, are trying to fill all classrooms with latest status of technological devices such as: projector, laptop and intelligent blackboard.
In conclusion, various measures can be taken to tackle the problems that professional doctors and teachers move to other countries rather than their own countries to contribute.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 143, Rule ID: GOING_TO_VBD[1]
Message: 'Going to' requires the base form: 'develop'
Suggestion: develop
...chers leaving their career and going to developed countries to work. Although there will ...
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Line 2, column 453, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teachers'' or 'teacher's'?
Suggestion: teachers'; teacher's
...seases. Moreover, when all professional teachers pursuit their careers in other develope...
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Line 3, column 425, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the latest'.
Suggestion: with the latest
...ance, are trying to fill all classrooms with latest status of technological devices such as...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.703125 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14272317972 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6171875 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.8936472258 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 121.666666667 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26301945042 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919271022372 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607130499665 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158219073294 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313000199517 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.78 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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