Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities.
To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Some aspects of humans’ life have been changed during the development of information technology. Moreover, it nowadays dominates where people live, what people do, and people’s work activities. In my opinion, it is like the coin has two sides, the information technology improvement has both many advantages and disadvantages and obviously, the benefits of the IT development can overshadow the negative consiquences of that one.
Today IT is the influential part of people’s lives. It provides a largely amount of space to save information and serve several services to approach the information from all over the world. For example, usefully the Internet provides, people who are settle in Japan can know and clarify the information in England with effortless. However, due to the speed of development of information technology, some people try to use it to make some virally fake news. Hence, it is too easy to misunderstand from poison information and it is needed to carefully clarify the real information.
Furthermore, technology of information has been changing people’s live in the posittive ways. Firstly, it helps people boarden their horizons easily. For instance, people, who has the live in some remote areas, do not have wealthy resources to approach some knowledge from entire world. However, it was changed due to the development of techonology of information. People can use the Internet to find more knowledge, digest more definitions and informations entire world in a great deal of subjects such as maths, or physics. Secondly, people can short their time on some searching work, some calculate work, or especially some relaxing activities. For example, the phone, which is the product made amid the development of information technology, can do several actions by people through audience. Nowadays, it is clearly that people can save more time on work or leisure by using some techniques on their phone of especially their laptop or their television.
To sum up, the advantages of the information technology can outweigh the disadvantages of the technology of information, and hence, it changed people’s life aspects in the positive ways.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
...vantages and obviously, the benefits of the IT development can overshadow the negative...
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Line 2, column 65, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('largely') instead an adjective, or a noun ('amount') instead of another adjective.
...ial part of people’s lives. It provides a largely amount of space to save information and serve ...
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Line 2, column 243, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
... usefully the Internet provides, people who are settle in Japan can know and clarify th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1833.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35964912281 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08473434712 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497076023392 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 589.5 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9419464055 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.823529412 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1176470588 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.29411764706 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216620826802 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802931651141 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653029681917 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174872342543 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606702209082 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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