Now-a-days, technology is getting advanced day by day. Working from home to ordering a pizza, everything is done by sitting at home on finger tip. Modernisation has changed the way of thinking of people. Some think it has more positive points while some are against it. It is a matter of discussion among all for the same.
Firstly, with the change in techniques the way of thinking has also changed. New trend has emerged of work from house, 80% of the generation is opting for a 'Free Lancer Job'. Distance and timing problem has created a need of online classes for students especially for the disabled one. With increase in technique world has become more closer, chatting or having video call has becoming more easy and affordable for everyone.
On the other hand, their are various disadvantages. Technology advancement has made everyone lazy, earlier there were more physical exercise and workouts. Children have started playing online games and play station rather than playing outside in open air, this has created problem among students effecting their health. People have stopped going to the market for shopping as everything is available on phone resulting in heath issue for many people. As per recent survey by 'The Hindustan Times' 95% of the world population is having a heart and kidney problem due to sitting and lack of exercises.
In my opinion, technology has more benefits than the disadvantages but it has effected life of every citizen. Use of technology should be in limit, buying of vegetable and even a pencil is done online which could be avoided.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 158, Rule ID: FREE_LANCER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'freelancer'?
Suggestion: Freelancer
..., 80% of the generation is opting for a Free Lancer Job. Distance and timing problem has c...
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Line 3, column 331, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'closer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: closer
... increase in technique world has become more closer, chatting or having video call has beco...
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Line 5, column 20, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...ble for everyone. On the other hand, their are various disadvantages. Technology a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, while, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01515151515 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61497550235 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621212121212 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8745519684 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.75 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103608537636 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0346291945324 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400644495559 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0692157711074 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421576656218 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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