Now-a-days, advertisement plays a huge role in promoting and marketing consumer products. Advertising by sporty player about the products have some deficits these are negligible compared to benefits. This essay will discuss why the advantage of promoting the product by sports man outweigh the disadvantages.
Promotion of the product by sports person has become famous these days. Companies hire a famous player and choose it as a brand ambassador for advertising, it is positive approach as a player. For example, Sania Mirza is advertising for Dabur products and explaining people about the benefits with her own experience. Additionally, Virat Kohli is advertising for Reebok and sharing his requirement while playing. Hence, it is necessary to hire players for advertising.
However, promoting the wrong products by a professional player ruins the career of the player. Last year, Twenty twent matches promoted an energy drink advertised by Mumbai team to level the team budget. People fall sick after taking the drink, 158 people were hospitalised. The government banned the drink and took compensation from the players who advertised the product. Strict action should be taken in these cases by the government as people only see the athlete image and purchase the product. These drawbacks cannot be ignored.
In my opinion, it has more benefits than its negative effect. People buy the product with the athlete's trust, reputation of the player is at stake rather than the product. Promotion should be done after using the product personally rather earning money.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 29, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, so, while, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41700404858 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82538305801 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607287449393 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.1682229481 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.7058823529 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5294117647 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11764705882 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165428481789 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553778743798 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050114042179 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1078392591 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730310283403 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.56 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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