Instead of trying to prevent climate change, people should find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Essay topics:

Instead of trying to prevent climate change, people should find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree

It is perceived by many that human should find out a way to live with climate change instead of trying to prevent it. Personally, I completely disagree with the opinion.

Hardly can anyone deny that climate change is a serious issue for existence of human beings. Obviously, there are lot of reasons why we should stop climate change. The first reason is that the phenomenon causes a plenty of disasters such as flood, drought, storm and so on which influence on agriculture and economies of most countries. Consequently, climate change threatens people’s lives significantly while people are not aware of this serious problem enough. The second reason is that climate change causes rising sea level because ice smells considerably while many regions of the world are lower than sea level. This will lead to the fact that there are more and more regions covered by sea water every single day. As a result, numerous people become homeless because there are not enough ground for everyone to live.

The other point needs to be concerned is that climate change can be prevented or reduced by a wide range of possible solutions. To be specific, governments can create environmental laws to stop using fossil fuels which causes carbon emission into the air. Besides, they should invest money in green energy sources such as wind power, solar power and hydro power so that we can stop global warming. Therefore, I have a belief that if governments and citizens put their efforts on these solutions, human can tackle this trouble.

In conclusion, I completely disagree with the opinion that people can live with climate change without any necessary actions to deal with it due to aforementioned analysis

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, first, if, moreover, second, so, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09824561404 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65125741813 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60350877193 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0426779765 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8125 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8125 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251068540223 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793050610203 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111717806369 0.0667982634062 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200117408725 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.150894946604 0.056905535591 265% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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