Intelligent machines such as robots are widely applied to take the place of human beings Please discuss the advantages and disadvantages

In the modern world, science has achieved enormous success in the field of technology because new invention are introduction day by day. Among them, the most important which is the source of everyone's attraction is a robot. It is kind of machine which is resemble the shape of human being and work according to the instructions feed in its memory.

Undoubtedly, robot took crucial place in nowadays. It is because robot can work for a long time without any tiredness and with more accuracy. It is also increase production. For instance, in printing press, we can feed instructions in robot memory and automatically perform with more efficiency and interface. Furthermore, robot only one work in a place of a number of worker and as a result, it cannot only save manpower but save the time also.

On the other side, have heard if there are flowers, there are thorns also likewise, robot has some drawbacks also and among them, the most important it is create unemployment. In the materialistic world, everyone wants to earn money for saving future but robot create problem in their path. Secondly, robot has no their own intelligence it is create by human being and that's way sometimes they give unexpected results.

In conclusion, we can say that weather robot occupied vital role in the world and are beneficial for us yet they cannot replace human being.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, likewise, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1135.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91341991342 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74261471883 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580086580087 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3124944798 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5833333333 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164025054838 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06067578717 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480574652986 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0930705300193 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.017452649035 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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