Mobile phones have made life easier. Anyone can use a mobile phone to answer , work call or home calls at any place 7 days a week. Do you think this development has more positive effects or negative effects on the individual and society.
Mobile phone have revolutionsed the concept of communication. They have a big role in transforming the society into a 24/7 society. This development has pros and cons but the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. I will discuss both in the upcoming paragraphs.
On the positive side, cell phones have simplified people's live. Today, people are well connected with their family and friends all the time. Moreover, earlier, if a person was late from work, his family would be worried about him till he returned home safe and sound. Today, a person inform his family of her whereabouts. Furthermore, if something goes wrong with anyone's vehicle and he is stranded on road then he can immediately call someone for help.
Additionally, today, the shopkeeper does not miss an important customer when he had to go home for five minutes for urgent work. Even in offices which require fieldwork, a person can take advice from his seniors any time and fro anywhere. Some business, in fact, trive on the mobile phone.
On the other side, mobile phone can take away from clam and quiet. A person with a mobile cannot draw a line between work and leisure. If he doesn't answer the mobile phone Or keep it switched off in his off duty hours, then he is considered rude and if he answer, then his family life in jeopardy. What is more, if he listens the mobile phone during driving then he can cause accidents. Moving further, sometimes cell phone can be very bugging especially when the person in the middle of vital meeting.
Summing up, mobile phone actually make life simple and convenient. It is in our hand to know where to draw line and use them to our benefit only.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 142, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... a line between work and leisure. If he doesnt answer the mobile phone Or keep it swit...
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Line 7, column 257, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'answers'.
Suggestion: answers
...s, then he is considered rude and if he answer, then his family life in jeopardy. What...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, well, in fact, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78200692042 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57443166993 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61937716263 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8200445546 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.7368421053 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2105263158 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15789473684 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255870882378 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788683612399 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575789909427 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133878340619 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371973833049 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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