Interacting with a foreign language

Essay topics:

Interacting with a foreign language

it is a fact that starting a new life in a country where its people speak with a discerpant language can lead to considerable social and practical issues. I strongly agree with this idea, and I am going to explain it in more detail in this essay.

One of the practical problems in environments with a different language is existence of some challenges to prove an idea or belief to others. it may happen in usuall street's conversations as well as debates between an employee and a manager. If a person can not interact with local people in living place, he will not be able to meet his ordinary requirements. this may entail dicrepant daily activities sames as shopping and using public facilities. For example, making a mistake in ordering or requesting a good is likely to put individuals into trouble and make undesirable misunderstanding. These people who are unfamiliar with the endemic language of their living place, will also encounter with problem in workplace. As an instance, a foregin staff might face with an unwanted situation to explain a subject to his manager as well as describling his right in a special circumstances. Without enough ability in speaking, be will have considerable practical problems.

On the other hand, there are social issues for the people who can not well communicate with others in a different language. they will not be able to participate in communities to express their requirements and needs to authorities. it can make a critical social effect on the people who have serious weakpoints in speaking. As an instance, there are local gatherings and consulting meetings in different regions of some countries, where they talk about their problems and cooperate to find a remedy for them. it is a social benefit for everyone, while disability in speakng will cause to lose this opportunity.

In short, I cmpletely agree with this issue that weakness in speaking with a foreign language not only does generate individual and practical problems but also makes undesirable social influences on people. To have a more convenient and successful life, people have to learn about the language of their living area.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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it is a fact that starting a new life in a...
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...able to meet his ordinary requirements. this may entail dicrepant daily activities s...
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... requirements and needs to authorities. it can make a critical social effect on th...
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...nd cooperate to find a remedy for them. it is a social benefit for everyone, while...
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... while disability in speakng will cause to lose this opportunity. In short, I cmpl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, well, while, for example, in short, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1809.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0530726257 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97099048003 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525139664804 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.818063959 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.411764706 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0588235294 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23529411765 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252807320994 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071213223033 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847798065344 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160841855997 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0854361846991 0.056905535591 150% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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