In present world, global traveling is insreasingly popular due to its lower price. In my view, this is a good trend.
Traveling from other countries boost local economy. A extensive scale of tourists can consume a large volume of money that can sitimulus local industries. For this reason, rapidly developing industries can provide excessive employment for local citizens which will also boost their revenue. For instance, travelers need to spend money on hostel, meal, soveniors and entrance tickets, and all of these spending can bring enourmous profit. Consequently, by opening the doors, country can raise more fund to invest in public facility, and people can live better with more chances to get a job.
International traveling are also beneficial to those tourists by broden their horizon. People are able to to learn more about local cultures and enrich their enperiences by traveling to other countries. For instance, when travelers explore the historic sites in Afica, they can learn what people originated from and life about their ancesters.They can also learned how modern society was generated by traveling to British. Traveling to outsider countries enable people to realize and apreciate other countries' history and lifestyle. Moreover, by identifying diffient cultures, people can become open-minded and full of imagination.
Accepting too many tourists may cause damage to local environment. A large number of tourists can accumulate massive gabage on palces of interst. Its hard for local staff to handle because these items are continuously generated at a extremely speed. Moreover, it's even unlikely to set strict regulations to restrict this phenominon because these tourists are migrating instantly. Consequently, the damage to local environment can even outweigh the economic benefits that they bring.
In conclution, international traveling is beneficial to incentive local economy and help tourists widen their horizon aswell.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, may, moreover, so, well, for instance, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6228956229 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86808611974 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585858585859 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.8898324167 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7777777778 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05555555556 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171682555312 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585967083521 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496280488501 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0934992068512 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587672460066 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.02 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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