Some people believe that it's better for the government to produce native food rather than depending on import. I agree with this idea.
Self-producing stimulate local economy and provide more employment opportunities to local people. To produce food, more fund needs to be invested on food industry and many factories and shops will be created. This means extensive food industry requires more employees to maintain the operation and they also cooperate with other industries that can bring more benefit to lacal economy as a whole. For example, a fish industry needs to introduce advertisements , and they also need iron package and facilities as well. consequently, the expansion of food industry prosper the local financial state and generate huge profit for local people at the same time.
On the other hand, that countries produce food by themselves promote local people's health. Food that generated in local companies are commonly more fresh and healthy since the process of producing is supersised by local authority. Particularly, people don't need to worry that nutritional value decay during transportaion because they can buy these local food once they are produced and packed. In contrast, food transported from foreign countries rely on fridge to preserve. This means people's health fail to be secured due to the fact that frozen food are more likely to result illness.
However, people can enjoy a variety of food through importing. It's undoubtly that food that can be produced in one single country is limited and often with few varieties of flavour. This is why importing from foreign countries may be significant for people to try more kinds of food. It's unevitably the fact that people prefer to lead a life with diversified food and to enjoy other countries cuizine. Therefore, importing is also necessary to enrich people's personal experience and improve their quality of life.
In conclution, countries shold encourage local food industry in order to motivate local economy and develop people's physical health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, for example, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3024691358 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69629770274 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546296296296 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2264718782 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4444444444 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356952975701 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135116379944 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862017305705 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231022627493 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0818454031817 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.