International travel has many advantages to both travelers and the country visited. Do you think advantages outweigh disadvantages?
It is often argued that multinational travel exerts profound impacts upon tourists the nation visited. In my opinion, I completely agree with this viewpoint and think that the advantages of tourism far outweigh the disadvantages.
On the one hand, there are undoubtedly some negative consequences of international tourism. It cannot be denied that many foreigners coming to other countries may have problems with paperwork such as visa application, plane ticket reservation. This would lead to a significant increase in the cost of goods, services and housing which is a detriment not only to native residents that have to directly suffer from but also to overseas tourists. Moreover, the higher number of people visiting a particular place would result in pernicious impacts of the environment by virtue of pollution and waste from transportations.
On the other hand, I strongly believe that international travel does more good than harm. Firstly, it creates job opportunities for local dwellers in terms of accommodation, entertainment and transport, which in turns facilitate their living standards and enhance tourist industries. Secondly, it establishes a good relationship with other countries, contributing greatly to the wealth of that country. Finally, travelling to other countries promotes the chances of exposing to unique cuisine and exotic customs. For example, if travelling to the countryside of Vietnam, people can experience the opportunities of using chopsticks, sitting on a mat to enjoy meals, go sightseeing in the field. Therefore, such kinds of journeys can be considered unforgettable and a chance of a lifetime.
In conclusion, although many people think travelling abroad is harmful, I personally reckon that it brings many values to local inhabitants, tourists and the economy
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58545454545 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2618323705 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2416274566 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.153846154 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0769230769 7.06120827912 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21820765973 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649749251299 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061272107091 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132240161632 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636585579342 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.36 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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