International travel sometimes makes people prejudiced rather than broad minded. What may be the reasons for this? What can people do to improve their understanding of the countries they visit?
In the world of today, people prefer to travel another countries more and more that is why occasionally people become bored and they dislike this rather than enjoy it. In this essay, I shall expand some reason behind this phenomenon and suggest some ways forward to reduce it.
To embark on, there are several reasons for happen this issue. First and foremost, people have a habit of their culture and tradition so that, they dislike other nations different rules. They can not manage in another community for this reason, they bored and they felt wrong when they so other Nations management of region. For a real-life example, these days China has have completely different region so that when other countries people travel China they uncomfortable because of some rules of host country is wrong for visitors and right from point of view from citizens. In addition to this, difference in lifestyle is major cause of the situation. Foreign nations women wear short-size cloth and other countries people have some others kind of mentality so that people become prejudiced.
To solution side, there are various way to increase people thinking towards host countries. To begin with, people should understand and involve in other countries culture and tradition. If they do this, they can feel original content of this and become interested in and adopt it. Moreover, people ignore other countries wearing style or clothes because, everyone have their own teste. If visitor like their style copy or purchase it. Every country have some unique style of something and people only see and enjoyed it.
By way of conclusion, people style of thinking is cause of these and people also improve their broadness and declined this phenomenon.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, in addition, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10877192982 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38414791496 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540350877193 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4100786284 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325745275382 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116947895429 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555650590134 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216238911272 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00470671405547 0.056905535591 8% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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