The Internet has come to dominate every aspect of human life. Despite its undoubted benefits, the Internet has caused more problems than it has solved.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples form your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
The Internet has been widespread around the world and people can’t deny its beneficial advantages. However, it also causes more problems for the world to solve. In my point of view, I agree that the global Internet’s advantages outweigh its disadvantages. In this essay, I’m going to give my explanation for this statement as well as some evidence needed for the proof.
The first thing I want to mention about Internet’s useful uses is making accessible connections for people who live near coastal areas. It is clear that children who come from poor villages near mountainous areas could have an insight of academic knowledge found on the Internet at some reliable websites during studying online because of the pandemic. That saved their time for asking teachers for help or going to a library nearby and spending time reading to extract some crucial quotes.
Besides, the Internet boosts work efficiency through discussions on social networking sites with online friends. Evidently, adults who are working at offices can come up with creative ideas by chatting with their colleagues through Messenger or making progress by learning to use some office tools efficiently through Microsoft groups on Facebook. Additionally, they can also find themselves a suitable co-worker or a perfect soulmate who will guide them out of darkness surrounded by tough challenges.
Finally, it is ubiquitous to see people appealing to shop on typical trading websites such as Shopee, Lazada, Tiki, etc. In fact, shopping online is much more convenient than going shopping at a local store for the reason that the price of products will go off on special events monthly and your savings will increase undeniably. In addition, it doesn’t take you long to shop because as usual, you just need to wipe up or down to choose things and one click to buy them.
In conclusion, the Internet makes this world a better place confirmed by its effective benefits particularly providing access to everyone, developing new ideas following with bring people together and having everything done easier for human. Thanks to its automatic operation system, the Internet is such a huge source of valuable information in this modern era that can make an impact on our normal lives which is proved by the preference of users. For that, the Internet can give solutions to critical issues rather than rising more trivial matters.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, however, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2018.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 391.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16112531969 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68192196709 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 176.041082164 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634271099744 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6239437542 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.125 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4375 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233883537089 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780587877291 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539356513659 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12621518193 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700203085065 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.