Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is believed that all students studying at universities should learn whatever they are interested in. On the other hand, some people think that they should get allowance to study subjects which will be useful in the future, particularly those correlated to science and technology. In this essay, I will consider both views and give my own opinion as well as some solutions.
First, if university students only study subjects that are interesting to them, they study more and more better and show a lot of interest resulted in being skilled at the field of their future career. Due to this explanation, they will work efficiently after leaving schools. Despite this, they can be lack of necessary skills for their job in particular the use of computer. In contrast, students who study subjects predicted to be helpful as planned may avoid being unemployed and slowly get used to this digital society, for instance there will be more jobs for developing areas such as producing eco-friendly food. Unfortunately, after graduating from university, no one can guarantee they will find a suitable job with their certificates. The reason for this is those new areas have just been in the trend recently so it may be a little arduous to be recruited.
In conclusion, students should focus on all subjects and make an effort to learn some soft skills by joining in the fieldwork to gain more experience at their colleges or universities. In addition, they have to cultivate more knowledge about technological things to get accustomed to the extreme change of the society depending on technology. To achieve those, they need to have a clear goal, a perfect strategy plus some hard work which will lead them to have a stable job later.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 101, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...nteresting to them, they study more and more better and show a lot of interest resulted in ...
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Line 3, column 482, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l lead them to have a stable job later.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, so, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, in particular, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94845360825 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78772748356 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591065292096 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3065299244 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1666666667 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.464972710028 0.244688304435 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164748972379 0.084324248473 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118178438616 0.0667982634062 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.333204510939 0.151304729494 220% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.174503540914 0.056905535591 307% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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