Organising a large family celebration such as wedding can often create
problems.
What can the problems associated with organising a large family event and what solutions can you suggest?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
Holding a family party can be too difficult to handle. As we usually have some disagreement or there is a lack of something needed for the event that leads to spending more money. That’s the reason why members of family typically end up having a quarrel after the party. In this essay, I will state detailed explanations as well as some suitable remedies.
Undoubtedly, we don’t have the same look as we differ from each other in every aspect of any fields. So before the party takes place, we often spend time sitting together and talking about what to buy, how to make everything goes smoothly, etc. During the discussion, there might be completely different ideas and things may become worse and worse if we don’t find a way to gather and choose the option that really makes sense. In addition, since people sometimes get angry easily, it is hard to stay calm when someone disagree with your suggestion and recommend everybody to think about theirs. For instance, they may start to hit each other instead of fighting against by words.
Besides, we can’t avoid mistakes while preparing for the upcoming celebration. Maybe we do make a plan well, check the shopping list carefully but we can’t assure that we don’t miss anything. That explains for taking more money from your budget to buy extra things because you don’t want your family to be disappointed, especially everything will fall apart by the clumsiness in the process of preparation. Due to the fact that we can’t bear it if we make an effort to satisfy someone and they don’t give anything back in return, we tend to be mad and shout at them.
In my opinion, these problems seem to be not so complex and we can solve them completely. For people may have conflicts while debating, it’s necessary for the main organizer or the most powerful one in the family to take responsibility. However, things only change when the person who tackle this issue have good ability of analyzing and recognizing obstacles. And unless we have any money left to buy more essential things for the party, we need to gather people around and ask for their choice about paying extra money for this special party. In fact, somebody may be selfish and they even won’t contribute a cent. In that case, you have to ask the main character of the event if we should exclude them or not.
To summarize, we often come across more and more problems than the day we planned about it and thought there would be nothing to worry about. But we can’t foresee anything so we have to cope with argument among our beloved people and the carelessness of us during preparing. It seems so daunting at first, anyway we need to deal with it by asking for help from other people and taking our pocket money to buy more things needed or reconsidering about whether we should let the ones who don’t make any contribution to join us at the party. I believe that as long as we try together and voluntarily give something valuable to hold a memorable event, it will be an unforgettable memory for all of us.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 519, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'disagrees'.
Suggestion: disagrees
...y, it is hard to stay calm when someone disagree with your suggestion and recommend ever...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, besides, but, first, however, if, look, may, really, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, in fact, talking about, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 24.0651302605 262% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 41.998997996 174% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2520.0 1615.20841683 156% => OK
No of words: 537.0 315.596192385 170% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69273743017 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81386128306 4.20363070211 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50882707993 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 287.0 176.041082164 163% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534450651769 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 792.9 506.74238477 156% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 5.43587174349 313% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5000716045 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.565217391 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.347826087 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69565217391 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148253013039 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517120823803 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0360448077926 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0971450487225 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0214509655506 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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