The internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades. Although some of these changes have been negative, the overall effect of this technology has been positive. What are your opinions on this?
Nowadays, the Internet plays an important role in our lives, it has significantly affected in all parts of lives and bring a lot of special things for humanity. Despite some negative effect, the Internet also has many functions.
Thanks to the Internet, people can develop the quality of lives, make things easier. In the past, people just learnt and found the information through books and lectures, but now people can use all this resources by the Internet so it very convenient. Moreover, the launch of smartphone and tablet with a lot of creative apps also helps us, especially the app "Google Map" or some apps like that, we can travel to many city or country without asking the citizens so it make our trip more comfortable. Finally, the social media is also effective. For instance, Facebook, Instagram, Twitter, etc. Due to these app, we can see many different information and news in all over the world, it also has an online shopping and very interesting shop which gives the customer many nice choices.
Nevertheless, the Internet also has a negative effect. Firstly, maybe it make people feel nervous when they have face-to-face meeting because they are use to talking through the phone screen. Secondly, because of the extremely fast development of the Internet, some people live base on the Internet and cannot live without it. Lastly, a lot of bad people use the Internet in bad ways and want to steal money from another people or sell a product with many wrong inside.
In conclusion, the Internet has brought many good things to our lives but we should be careful with a bad people who use the Internet in a bad purpose. We should be an intelligent users of the Internet.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...untry without asking the citizens so it make our trip more comfortable. Finally, the...
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Line 3, column 613, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this app' or 'these apps'?
Suggestion: this app; these apps
...cebook, Instagram, Twitter, etc. Due to these app, we can see many different information ...
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Line 3, column 635, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[4]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much different information', 'a good deal of different information'.
Suggestion: much different information; a good deal of different information
...tter, etc. Due to these app, we can see many different information and news in all over the world, it also...
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...tter, etc. Due to these app, we can see many different information and news in all over the wo...
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Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...as a negative effect. Firstly, maybe it make people feel nervous when they have face...
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Line 5, column 152, Rule ID: BE_USE_TO_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...e face-to-face meeting because they are use to talking through the phone screen. Se...
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Line 7, column 181, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'user'?
Suggestion: user
...ad purpose. We should be an intelligent users of the Internet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, lastly, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86941580756 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63169221212 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549828178694 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.8764404079 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.214285714 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134530005001 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525174776725 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395692588953 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0906182684504 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0166013719631 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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