The Internet has significantly brought changes to our lives in recent years. However, there remains some disagreement as to whether the overall influence of advanced technology of the Internet has been positive or negative. While there are certainly valid arguments to the contrary, I personally believe that the benefits of the Internet far outweigh its drawback. This essay aims to evaluate this point of view.
First of all, it is undeniable fact that the Internet has improved the ways of communication. But a problem has been occasionally seen in people, who spend too much time at their computer terminal rather than relating to people in real word, is a disorder in communication. Most of them engross in the virtual environment and after passing time, eventually, they find to disorder in communication with other people. In addition, children’s safety exposes to risk. For example, by surfing in various site children, who are not familiar with the cyber environment, maybe find to access the Deep Web which is a dangerous and risky site for their physical and mental health. Hence, this technology can be disturbed in social communication.
Equally importantly, the Internet allows to flowing the information around us. For instance, in an earlier time, conducting research entailed long hours searching library shelves. While, now, the same information is accessible easily at the click of a button. Therefore, the Internet not only prevents from wasting the time for accessing some information but also provide them easily.
By the way of conclusion, the Internet plays a key role in shaping the modern lifestyle. Although this technology can create a communication disorder and to expose the children’s safety but has had a positive impact because of the flow of information.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
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...ion facilitate both contact with loved ones in faraway places and global trade. ...
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Suggestion: Equally,
... in faraway places and global trade. Equally importantly, though, the Internet has p...
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...Internet has placed the entire word and all of the information in it at our fingertips. I...
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...the click of a button. Admittedly, not all of the information available on the Internet i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, nonetheless, so, while, as to, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35272727273 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00786846908 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.0607778735 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.230769231 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 19.0 4.38176352705 434% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191953483603 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067976291289 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847492385301 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0513799885241 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774445792994 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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