The internet has transformed lives and economies but it is turning the world into a global village. Soon everybody will think and behave in the same way.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
There is no doubt that the internet changed lives significantly. However, it can be argued whether these changes are good or not. Maybe the Internet affects our individuality and in the nearest future everybody will behave alike.
It is well-know that new technologies eased our everyday life. Firstly, with the help of the Internet it is possible to keep in touch with relatives and friends, who live far away. Secondly, financiers now may receive information and news connected with economics much more faster that in the past. It helps them to accomplish more financial operations at a time. Finally, the whole process of getting access to the information became easier. Now students do not need to go to libraries and spend their precious time - almost every book can be found on the Internet. What is more, after a long working day people can read all the news and fresh articles using their smartphones or laptops. There is no need to buy newspapers, magazines, books.
On the other hand, some people are concerned about people behaving in the same way due to the Internet's influence. For example, nowadays there is a trend of blogging on Youtube. Thousands of people film themselves and post videos about their lives on the website. They tell about their journeys, universities, relationships with friends and relatives, give cooking and art master-classes. More and more internet users join the community of video bloggers, children, adults, elderly people. However, there is no original content anymore, people borrow each other's ideas and film quite the same videos. Of course, because of the globalization which is moved forward by the Internet, people tend to behave alike, lose their national traditions. People are more prone to spend much time surfing the Internet and thinking how to replace obsolete smartphones as quickly as possible.
To conclude, it must be noticed that the development of new technologies had an impact on lives and economies. However, it makes people behave in the same way, forget traditions, celebrate foreign holidays.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 269, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'faster' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: faster
... and news connected with economics much more faster that in the past. It helps them to acco...
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Discourse Markers used:
['finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'no doubt', 'of course', 'what is more', 'in the same way', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.248691099476 0.247107183377 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.151832460733 0.155533422707 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0837696335079 0.0946595960268 88% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0680628272251 0.0501214627716 136% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0418848167539 0.0437548338989 96% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0942408376963 0.122226691241 77% => OK
Participles: 0.0314136125654 0.0403226058552 78% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.78000406817 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0287958115183 0.0326793684256 88% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0837696335079 0.0861772015684 97% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0157068062827 0.021408717616 73% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0104712041885 0.011925033212 88% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2070.0 1933.35771543 107% => OK
No of words: 336.0 316.048096192 106% => OK
Chars per words: 6.16071428571 6.12580529183 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20517956788 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.366071428571 0.374742101984 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.291666666667 0.28420135186 103% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.217261904762 0.203846283523 107% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.133928571429 0.137316102897 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78000406817 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.037074148 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613095238095 0.56093040696 109% => OK
Word variations: 72.0361395369 60.7387585426 119% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0891783567 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.7743622355 77% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.3664219912 49.517814964 53% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5714285714 127.492653851 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7743622355 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.761904761905 0.814263465372 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 45.1666666667 49.1944974215 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.43 1.69124875643 85% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.418250766584 0.332605444948 126% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0613067992978 0.102741220458 60% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0385025057314 0.0668466124924 58% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.446318331022 0.534860350844 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.123390228127 0.148594505496 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145649062619 0.134430193775 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749534897991 0.0742795772207 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.348256593288 0.324371583561 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0695577194854 0.0638462369009 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.299473820473 0.228012699653 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213562686554 0.058150111329 37% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.68436873747 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 10.4468937876 134% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.