The Internet when used as a source of information, has more drawbacks than advantages. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
These days, people have gotten into using the Internet as their daily habit to get news, work, and study. Although many think that searching for information on the Internet has many disadvantages, I still believe that the Internet has given access to a large volume of valuable information to the general people.
On the one hand, the popularity of the Internet can get people in trouble. The first reason is that many companies make use of the development of the digital technology era to publish various tabloid information to brainwash viewers. They attach newspapers with sensational headlines not being accurate and reliable to get their profit and increase sales. Furthermore, viewers may deal with stealing personal information via the Internet through cybercrime. For instance, some websites force us to use personal information to sign up and even pay by credit card or card to get documents, but the purchaser would not receive anything.
On the other hand, the Internet is functional, and these are the justifications. Firstly, people may get up-to-date information, which is available on the net whenever and whatever they want if owning electronic devices. Viewers only click the place in several minutes instead of using newspapers which wastes our time and money and impacts our environment, especially deforestation. Nevertheless, data is easily compared and contrasted; for example, my team researched a study about the effect of food on children. We might not complete the task in just one day without the help of the Internet.
In conclusion, let me reiterate that the Internet plays an enormous role in our life because it makes data retrieval and comparison easier.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23616236162 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92689949417 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634686346863 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.657500784 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.153846154 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143462985177 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494896640329 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338413553158 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0823328002241 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447158348813 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.