It is becoming increasingly expensive to keep museums open to the public. What do you think is the best way of funding them?
Museums have always been claimed to be the heart of the community, not only preserving the nation and local sources but also attracting many foreign visitors. However, many modern people consider that maintaining the budget to keep the museums open is a difficult problem. On the other hand, I believe there are various ways which can be introduced to improve this issue, especially from government and private business.
First and foremost, the financial help from government is effective and benefical. In addition, governments not only provide salaries to many professional workers on running museums, but they also pay money to maintain the quality of various historical objects displayed in national museums.For example, If Vietnamese government had failed to allocate budget to Museum of Art, this destionation would have been demolished many years ago because of lacking in funding.
Besides government, many private organisations also contribute massively to the preservation of nation museums. By investing a huge amount of money on constructing many local museums, the business may create more opportunities for local residents and overseas visitors to enhance their knowledge about their ancestors and countries in the past. Moreover, many adverts donated by private companies effectively attract the awareness of people about these historical buildings , leading to more money came from visitors.
Taking everything into consideration, since the budget to maintain the quality of museums is exorbitant, funding provided from other contributions is necessary. In my point of view, the assistance from government and private business is the most effective way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, for example, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6812749004 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98104366207 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613545816733 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.0428462155 49.4020404114 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.6 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0665850787298 0.244688304435 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0321549152206 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03856448582 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.048832972153 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414651528947 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.96 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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