It is believed that young people are more interested in international pop singers and movie stars then in history and historical people.why is this?
Due to globalisation, many foreign pop musicians and celebrities are famous among the worldwide. As a result, the young people mostly follow them. However, some argue that youngsters are not fond of our history and they have not interested in to know about freedom fighters. This essay will discuss both views and give their opinion.
To begin with, in technical era,young people mostly devoted to their hobbies such as listen music ,watch movies and so on.thus,they have a dense interest towards international pop singers and movie stars.because they entertain youth via sing different type of songs and act like a real heroes.secondly, these celebrities are very popular among the youngster and they also become a role model for them. In addition, they live in glamour world and they have a lot of fans following for their stylish looks, living in a luxurious lifestyle and they are trend settles so youth follow their footsteps.
Eventually,international celebrities are popular because of Paparazzi and technology.everyday they are seen at every home on television so people never forget their faces in their life. They are public figures and they host many shows like KBC and coffee with Karan that way they are popular stars in globally.
On the other hand, teenager are not interested in our history.They think it is a useless because past is not related to present.moreover, students who study science and biology subjects they have not required knowledge of history. Furthermore, some students are studying subjects like arts and literature they interested in history. In addition, juvenile is not interested in historical person because our history have plethora of freedom fighters show they cannot remember all them.
In conclusion, history is illustrates our past but sometime it is a boring for young people. However, Juvenile mostly admire from international celebrities and pop singers because they provides entertainment them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37133550489 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14508903795 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560260586319 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.5312100218 49.4020404114 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.846153846 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6153846154 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5384615385 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172333630019 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705845057474 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456711210553 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110502556158 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466123165875 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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