It is better for college students to live far away from home than live at home with their parents. Do you agree or disagree
Well, education is more important nowadays. A recent decade are witness of development in education sector amid this development, there one phenomenon that has associated with it. According to this phenomenon, a handful of people argue that it is more beneficial for students to live in hostel while they study in college compared to live with their parents. I will try to throw light upon a perspective of an above statement that is described with my point of view. I will also try to posit view about it.
To embark on, there are multifarious reason to shore those people who are in favor of that live for from family while studying higher education. first and foremost, the key benefit is people can learn manage the time as well as they become independent. The have a chance to grow a value of community, whether it helps to communicate with other people and concrete their relation by their ideas. Secondly, in terms of education, students have no burden of presence of parents what they face at home when they are go out with friends. Last but not the least, children has been learnt new skill like culinary and some other household work if they are more likely to live in pain guest. In addition, people make more concentration on study and continually interact with topper students to obtain high score in examination.
On the other side of spectrum, regarding a debate of students should live with their parents while they get education. The predominant reason is that students are feasible to distract from other bad sources when they are getting connected with harsh peers. Who are drugs addict or embrace the illegal way to get more money. Hence, students need to be live under observation of their parents because this age are formative years and if they spoil it except think about its consequence then there future would become very dangerous and they have wander for getting job. Another reason are related to this perception is behavioral of children also get change if they accompanied with indiscipline boy. Thereby, parents is only way to offer the lesson of value of kit and kin or community. Parents always think about their children's future and put their all endeavor to bright child's developments as well as students have learnt from their experience.
Aggelomerating, all the points I elaborated an above that can be concluded that obtain education with family and far from their has no any impacts but there are other potential aspects associate with child's development and their behavior which led to affect later in future. That is why I support that declaration whether students have to study their further education with parents may lead to more beneficial and it is more fruitful in my opinion.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: First
...family while studying higher education. first and foremost, the key benefit is people...
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Suggestion: to manage
...st, the key benefit is people can learn manage the time as well as they become indepen...
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Suggestion: gone
...ts what they face at home when they are go out with friends. Last but not the leas...
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Suggestion: Who is a are
...are getting connected with harsh peers. Who are drugs addict or embrace the illegal way...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'wandered'.
Suggestion: wandered
...uld become very dangerous and they have wander for getting job. Another reason are rel...
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Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...tion with family and far from their has no any impacts but there are other potenti...
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...lopment and their behavior which led to affect later in future. That is why I support that d...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...heir behavior which led to affect later in future. That is why I support that declaration...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, in addition, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 24.0651302605 199% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 78.0 41.998997996 186% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2272.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 463.0 315.596192385 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90712742981 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63868890866 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6168033698 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51403887689 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 727.2 506.74238477 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6769925553 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.6 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.15 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243024562272 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707005712593 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665415049933 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152261144973 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.014877963956 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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