It is better for college students to live far away from home than to live at home with their parents. Do you agree or disagree
Deciding whether to live at home with family or reside outside has always been a challenge to high school pupils. Even though college students who attend school from the family house benefit from parental guidance, I believe that staying away from home is more profitable as it give room for personal development.
To begin, one of the major factors that is considered as an advantage to students attending school from home is guidance from parents. They enjoyed much affections from their family and they are always at the sight of their parents, who guide them in making crucial decisions. As a result, high schoolers rely completely on their caregivers. Jack my neighbour's son is a good example as his parents were the ones that chose the course he would specialise. Despite the challenges he had in mathematics, they made him study engineering.
On the other hand, schooling far away from home make the students to have self development and I agree. This is true because learners who reside outside family home, take decisions on their own without consulting or waiting for their parents. They acquire self independence and are self reliance, which are key features that will boost their confidence even after college. All these are virtues that can help one standout later in life. For instance, many renowned managing directors in various companies that are performing excellently, were thought to have lived away from family while in school. They were able to acquire viable personal skills that have given edge over others.
To conclude, it is certainly true that high school students are always faced with making decision on where to live while schooling. I have no doubt that those attending school from outside home are better equipped for the feature than other going from their parents house, because they learn how to be self dependence and make decision without the knowledge of their parents
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Suggestion: gives
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Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, for instance, no doubt, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08544303797 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49350020299 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569620253165 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2045195576 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.133333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335211379838 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104803803004 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813145009943 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219031707714 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453719517904 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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