Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an
unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try
and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own
knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
While some individuals are of the opinion that it is better to accept unfavourable circumstances, such as unsuitable employment or low income, others with contrary view, suggest it will be of best interest to attempt to improve such unpleasant situations. I agree with the later view as I believe that determination and hard work will help turn hard times around. Both viewpoint will be considered in this essay.
On the one hand, those philosophers who believe that humans should accept difficult conditions argue that it is the best. They say that every situation that one has to face in life has be predestined by the almighty, therefore, it will be of no good trying to change the situation. Looking at this from religious perspective, one will agree with them to some extent. However, even though some religious extremists hold the view that life occurrences are only but destiny, they also, agree that the creator has given us the wisdom to significantly improve on our predestined lives and make the best out of it.
On the other hand, I share the same view as other group of people, who believe that unfavourable times in life could be improved upon, if we have the courage and will power to face such challenges. For instance, My uncle, Mr Anthony, who was the General Manager of Nesco company, lost his job because he lacked PhD degree. He had to bravely accept the situation and pursue doctorate degree, which he acquired within two years. Today, he has been rewarded as the CEO of the Central Bank of Nigeria. Thus, this shows that with determination and hard work, one can reverse unpleasant situation.
To sum up, undoubtedly, there are some times when we are faced with difficulties and feel they are programmed to be so. However, I believe that even when we encounter such conditions, we should make an attempt to change the them by being determined and work hard to improve and turn bad situations into favourable outcomes.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 190, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the best'.
Suggestion: of the best
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Line 5, column 186, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...uation that one has to face in life has be predestined by the almighty, therefore,...
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Line 13, column 172, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...believe that even when we encounter such conditions, we should make an attempt to...
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Line 13, column 222, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'them'?
Suggestion: the; them
...ns, we should make an attempt to change the them by being determined and work hard to im...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, for instance, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1623.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87387387387 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7340524154 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552552552553 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.6843925618 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.928571429 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7857142857 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197504626832 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632736286369 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620230690474 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122672016325 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434596097925 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.