it is better for college students to live in schools than live at home with their parents.
Do you agree or disagree?
Many students are faced with the dilemma of whether to live in a university dormitory or at
home with their parents. From my perspective, a dormitory is evidently the better option
for most students.
Firstly, there is a common belief that living with their parents is better for students’ personal
development. Many people argue that students living at home may fully concentrate on
their academic studies because their parents are likely to support them in various ways,
such as by doing household tasks. However, I believe some students may become over-
reliant on their parents as a result, and thus do not develop the ability to live independently
in the future. By contrast, students who live in dormitories must assume responsibility in all
aspects of life. Therefore, they may acquire the skills necessary for self-reliance, ranging
from financial management and problem-solving to meal planning and home management,
all of which are essential to foster the all-round personal development of this group of
students.
In addition, there are several distinct advantages of choosing on-campus residences. The
most evident advantage is that students who choose this type of accommodation would
have easy access to libraries and various learning resources that are readily available at
university. Another clear benefit is that those living in student accommodation are exposed
to a diverse environment with people from various social and cultural backgrounds. As a
result, students are better prepared to live in today’s multi-cultural world.
From the issues outlined above, one can conclude that living on a university campus is a
better choice for students than living at home with their parents. I predict that the number
of students choosing to live in university accommodation will remain high in the future.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.89010989011 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.6549985789 2.80592935109 130% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564102564103 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 97.383793856 49.4020404114 197% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.181818182 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8181818182 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.38176352705 456% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.443114592029 0.244688304435 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.189586333599 0.084324248473 225% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128408754907 0.0667982634062 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133390108498 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126991687178 0.056905535591 223% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.18 12.4159519038 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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