It is better for students at university to live far away from home than to live at home with their parents To what extent do you agree or disagree

Essay topics:

It is better for students at university to live far away from home than to live at home with their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people argued that university students are encouraged to live independently away from home instead of living in the nurture of parents remains a source of controversy. In my opinion, i completely agree with this view

Campus life would offer several opportunities for undergraduate to enhance their cultural sensitivity and evolve essential soft skills. University dormitories could create environment where students from different walk of life and cultures gather and interact on a daily basis, meaning that understanding of multicultural could develop in each students who people must live in diverse cultural life every day. In addition, choosing to stay near the university also easy to participate in extracurricular activities which things help refine student's life skill. In other word, it would be significantly disadvantage for those who just to hear from experience of their's parents rather than self-experience to life skills practice.

Another major advantage of tertiary students is that they may become more responsible self-image lead their independent life. In facts, they would have to face difficult situation and expose their decisions in tough time without parental intervention. For example, they would have to deal with problems in life from allowance which things forced them to take responsibility for their actions. Such circumstance would well equip them with various types of qualities such as the knowledge of coping with problematic situation and decisions making. As a result, people who like campus life would have likely become more mature than home-living ones.

In conclusion, living in university accommodating would allow students enrich their knowledge and sharpen their necessary soft skills, and lead a self-reliant life which undergraduate live at home could hardly gain.

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Average: 9.6 (6 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70802919708 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05217736534 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609489051095 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0341231682 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.181818182 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9090909091 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281171040842 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108985536132 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789742405553 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202533421508 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675522297275 0.056905535591 119% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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