as well as making money, business also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree?
there are many argument around that, beside making money, achievement also need to have public responsibilities. In my opinion, the main purpose of business is create profit, i agree that they should engage their business in socially responsible manner
On the one hand, generating profit is the top priority for each companies and it contribute some benefit for community. Firstly, the enterprises to earn as much profit as they will pay more in taxes to the government. As a result, authority have more revenue to spend in chief fields, including education, health and traffic, which leads to progress of living standards of the whole society. Secondly, by earning huge profits companies have many opportunity to develop their business. For example, firms could used their badget to expand their production, creating new jobs for society
On the other hand, there are many reasons for businesses to agree that they have social responsibilities. First reason, if companies does not have a specific action, the environment will be seriously threatened. Without responsible and control, maximise production process take place in all enterprises and corollary of that is environment destruction. Consequently, they will spend more cost to compensate for irresponsible bahaviour. Another reason is that enterprises should help those less fortunate by their profit. As an example, big corporation such as Vinamilk,Vingroup have enhanced their public image through charity actions suchs as providing scholarships
In conclusion, i recognise that making money is the fundamental principle of business but i would agree that all business should have a profound responsibility to society
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5719844358 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14629397401 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618677042802 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.1459017092 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.181818182 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5454545455 7.06120827912 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220365926486 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752042496726 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842673456819 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181828386301 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114217098543 0.056905535591 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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