In modern society, a debate has been argued between the people claiming that skills imprinted on the inherent husks and the other experts agreeing to the aspect of talents can be reclaimed by teaching and training. In this essay, I will shed some lights on the factors contributing to the problem.
On the one hand, definitely , natural gift which wildly fertilized one’s mind in the certain points during the first torch of the tree skills. That means the capability of bearing the essential notes is already in the bloody veins, and there is no doubt that can help those heirs crossover their normal rivals in the various battlefield. For instance, a musician such as G-Dragon easily pour the lyrics into a song more sophisticated than other idols, or Eminem can spit the words out of his mouth faster than some particular mumble rappers.
On the flip side of the coin, these people gained those skills easily enough to neglect the training and studying. In the matter of fact that knowledge is not the available property of any single persons, it just have to be earned no matter the process or circumstance is . For example, in the field of sports such as soccer, players must research various regulations, understand variant tactical formations to carry out combined operations in the game. Additionally, in competition, the lower people always make a hundred times effort to overcome those who stand above, likewise their experiences and endurances are refined to the very end to reach the required rank. For example, Bodybuilder cannot lift 100 kg when owning a slim body.
In conclusion, whether your starting point is high or low, to travel through the fathomless depth, you must keep going forward.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, likewise, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9965034965 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62052961129 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.678321678322 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.0163609596 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.909090909 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171737559781 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494210329425 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371796458931 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.080018518374 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474783185777 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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