It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
Much may said that, Normally kids have extra-odinary hidden profession related to physical games or art, which might people do not, By their birth. While, often it has been proven that other children have the abilities to become a artist or sports person by training them-self. I strongly believe that few things are god-gifted and but it is not impossible to achieve a goal in life.
Firstly, Newly born kid usually takes time between two to three years to stand on their own though, some naturally start walking earlier which makes differentiate them to other. Secondly, Rarely child's mind is broader enough from the birth. For instantiate, Recent studies demonstrated that a child has been playing guitar since he was 5 year old without learning it. For another example, a kid who's muscles strength are strong as a teen boy, and he is a famous foot-baler in India, and some have special voice which has been adapted by the practice most, and vary least amount of people are luckily have it.
On the other hand, To become a player takes a lot more time for modification. However, there is no shortcuts to grab so, to gain that we have to go through the processor by practicing and improve our skills whether it is a art or sports. For instance, with the proper and right guidance it is possible to be a great artist. In younger age people are learning, starting earlier can be beneficial because in this age minds adaptation is on peak which makes things easy to them.
To concluded, Little number of have that ability to become something. Nevertheless, this is wrong belief that other persons can not reach that level.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
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...urally start walking earlier which makes differentiate them to other. Secondly, R...
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...udies demonstrated that a child has been playing guitar since he was 5 year old w...
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...learning it. For another example, a kid whos muscles strength are strong as a teen b...
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... been adapted by the practice most, and vary least amount of people are luckily have it. ...
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...e other hand, To become a player takes a lot more time for modification. However,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79151943463 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5435757061 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650176678445 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.486355779 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.307692308 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203590304905 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673108194029 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431389979114 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114290331115 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0175778347483 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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