We live in a world of technology these days. While the internet brings with it clear advantages, the problems in terms of control and security of information outweighs the advantages.
Nowadays, Technology has become advanced and it is affecting the humans lives in a positive way. However, There are privacy issue, restriction on personal data and private content. I totally satisfied with this statement. In this essay we will considering the negative factor of advancement.
Firstly, The most common thing is rumour, In this world, fake newses spread rather than the real one. Secondly, scamming people by hacking, bullying. In other words, most of people are hacking id and steal their personal information. For instantiate, a person send their private photos with other, whom he really trusted on any social networking sites and then someone hack his id and he will spamming him and post his picture with false captions on it, troll him, It can cause depression moreover sometimes it become the reason for suicide.
Furthermore, There are various drawbacks of it, as compare to regular individual and internet user. The person who uses surplus internet fall sick as usalls. On the other hand, spending most of the time on watching laptop whether a person is studying or watching movie directly effect on eye sight. Generally, crime rate is boosted up in the past 5 years because of internet. For example, Mostly terrorist are gaining basic details about other country and it made easier to attack. In addition, A person can easily make their wrong identification by infecting internet in general it is a virus.
To concluded, we can clearly see that internet has defeated the benefits. Moreover, a person become addicted to it and do not even know about that and so more causes will face by time period.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 79, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ed and it is affecting the humans lives in a positive way. However, There are privacy issue, rest...
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Line 1, column 225, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...otally satisfied with this statement. In this essay we will considering the negat...
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Line 1, column 246, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'consider'
Suggestion: consider
... this statement. In this essay we will considering the negative factor of advancement. ...
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Line 1, column 294, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing the negative factor of advancement. Firstly, The most common thing is rumour...
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Line 3, column 167, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...e by hacking, bullying. In other words, most of people are hacking id and steal their personal...
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Line 3, column 512, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
... cause depression moreover sometimes it become the reason for suicide. Furthermore...
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Message: This word is usually spelt together: 'eyesight'.
Suggestion: eyesight
...ng or watching movie directly effect on eye sight. Generally, crime rate is boosted up in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in addition, in general, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0258302583 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6204614598 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649446494465 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.1416467052 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.125 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9375 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.9375 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0936793341432 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0324940827881 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350370204441 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0607006462508 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197313197412 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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