In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
In this modern era, Basic sickness is spreading at its peak because of unhealthy food eaten by a lot of people and they are having hard time with their body. consequently, governments are considering it wisely and implement surplus taxes on junk food. I am totally satisfied with this statement.
Firstly, To boost up economy the key is taxes, and that taxes return us into life saver facilities whether it is hospital or firebrigade. In other words, people who would spend money on fast food with the high tax.however, they are actually paying their medical bills. Moreover, it will be beneficial for government as well. For instantiate, If a person facing problems like food poisioning so, it is government's responsibilty although, a person having some serious issue apart from the stomach.
Secondly, There can be less consumption of unhealthy food. people from an middle class will find it kind of expensive and side effect of that so, aspect of this they may prefer healthy food rather than junk food. On the other hand, generally richer family always have good meals from the beginning of their life. Nevertheless, nowadays most frequent number of people are already addicted. For example, study showed that human body contain some toxins which make our tongue taste and that always get attracted to cheesy things and we instead of stay away that makes a person addict. In general, according to the science huge amount of people from middle class were sick because of the fast food.
In conclusion, We can clearly see that, by applying this people will have healthier life. Anyhow, some countable drawbacks for those who are used-to it and people who look for cheaper. In my opinion, it would be great idea charging more on this kind of killer food somehow i think that it will be distinct in future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91205211726 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52417987623 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618892508143 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.246625235 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.25 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1875 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.625 7.06120827912 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28390595154 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883223684164 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449127874514 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172073246529 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256457844568 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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