Being a celebrity can bring benefits and problems at the same time. To what extent do you agree on this statement?
To be a famous face it shall has advantages but along with the disadvantages. I totally agreed with this aspect. however, In this essay we will discuss both pros and cons, and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
Firstly, Celebrity get paid the significant amount of money. Moreover, they become idol of a lot of people all across the world. For instantiate, the famous Indian movie star shah-rukh-khan's net worth is approximately 500 million dollar and he has 30 million fan on the social media. Secondly, The massive respect they get from the world, and the support. Generally, People get influence from them and they try to copy actors to show them support and love, In the positive way. However, A celebrity have a Luxrious life.
On the other hand, Often there would be some causes occurs like security issues. In general, when a singer is goes on vacations with his family he guards will always remain with them so do not enjoy that moment. Furthermore, media become the main problem, and controversy begin from media, In other words media always look for breaking news when they do not have any news so, they target celebrities. For example, when an anchor is interviewing a artist and suddenly start asking weird questions and he mistakenly misbehave with anchor and it becomes a big issue.
To concluded, There is a lot more struggle, anyhow it worth twice in the form of money and love. I think that, To being a celebrity is much more difficult than it is looks like.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, i think, in general, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1232.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75675675676 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61070106509 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625482625483 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.6190580162 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1333333333 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2666666667 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5333333333 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.092591808974 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0346420416586 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368283409477 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0578201893761 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251737055976 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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