Being a celebrity can bring benefits and problems at the same time. To what extent do you agree on this statement?
A famous person or celebrity become popular through media as well as due to people celebrity brings benefits along with problems.
To begin with, there are many benefits of being a celebrity. Firstly, as a celebrity become its own image or dignity. Every one know to famous person. Secondly, every person give regards and respect to the famous person. For example, Amir Khan is famous personality. Most of the people give respect and like his acting, work or physique. Thirdly, famous person have more money, comfort devices and more property. Moreover they can bring what they want.
On the other hand, there are more problems for celebrity. First of all, famous person cannot go anywhere lonely and cannot enjoy freedom with family. Moreover, famous person does not have enough time for their family and persue their hobbies. Furthermore, famous person have to go anywhere with security because of the crowd.
In addition to this, due to popularity media always spread news regarding famous person. Moreover, media create issues regarding personal or families problems.
In conclusion, being a famous film star or sports man take more benefits but, we cannot denied about negative effects.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 414, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, first of all, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1011.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 193.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23834196891 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35604919542 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60621761658 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.6429814959 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.1875 106.682146367 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.0625 20.7667163134 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.375 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109429718499 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0401895494253 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501310734361 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0698785158185 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406758572354 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.22 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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