We live in a world of technology these days. While the internet brings with it clear advantages, the problems in terms of control and security of information outweighs the advantages.
Firstly, one of the most beneficial aspect of the modern technology is the internet, using the internet allows people to have a vast amount of data and informations at their fingertips. whatever, question they have they can search for it on the internet, and have their answers. also, internet allows many people to interact with each others from all over the world. contacting with people has become extremely easy .
On the other, hand one of the draw backs of internet is that people don’t have to rely on their own memories anymore, and if you take away their smartphone and internet they couldn’t do a very good job of navigating their daily life, or remembering vital information. also, people do not put that much effort to go out and make friend and have a physical contact, they prefer to stay at home and use their computer to connect with other people. This kind of behaviour can destroy a person social life and have a negative side effect on their mental health.
In conclusion modern technology is improving every day, humans life quality but relying too much on technology it can have negative side effect on person life and make a person not self sufficient enough.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Whatever
...a and informations at their fingertips. whatever, question they have they can search for...
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Suggestion: Also
...n the internet, and have their answers. also, internet allows many people to interac...
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Suggestion: Contacting
...th each others from all over the world. contacting with people has become extremely easy ....
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ng with people has become extremely easy . On the other, hand one of the draw ba...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
...life, or remembering vital information. also, people do not put that much effort to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 988.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 205.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81951219512 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55590706956 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590243902439 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.4977836531 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.5 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.625 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0891119928279 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475672371028 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347545647825 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0661827054142 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418012021938 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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