Some people think that one of the best ways to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and the other vehicles To what extent do you agree or disagree

Essay topics:

Some people think that one of the best ways to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and the other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Inherit of environment issue is the auto-mobile and commercial vehicles, said by some people, and Charging more on petrol would be the effective solution to control pollution. I am not satisfied with this statement. In this essay we will contrast the dark side of this opinion and I will provide few solution.

Firstly, By the raising money on fuel, it will affect the resources related to food and and more essential product which are used by millions of people. In general, various things shipped from out of town in trucks and every crucial product's will be expensive. In other words, it may cause hatred for country's president. However, it can be result as the war among people.

On the other hand, Making a rule of odd-even on car will be beneficial to clean the air. For instantiate, India has already made this decision, three days ( Monday, Tuesday, Wednesday ) only person can drive odd plate-number vehicle and other three days even cars can be on roads this rule is only for civilians. Planting more trees is better way to save the environment and recycling system. For example, Most studies demonstrated that tree are eco-friendly and contain oxygen and adapt carbon-dioxide, furthermore that works like air filter for world.

In conclusion, We can clearly see that gaining price of petrolium have some causes which will difficult to handle in future. Nevertheless, there are some aspects illustrate that nature problems can be defeated by more research. In my opinion, I would prefer trees have the major role in world may be its god's gift to stabilize the earth.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun solution seems to be countable; consider using: 'few solutions'.
Suggestion: few solutions
...side of this opinion and I will provide few solution. Firstly, By the raising money on fu...
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...ll affect the resources related to food and and more essential product which are used b...
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Line 3, column 194, Rule ID: OUT_OF_PLACE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'out-of-town'?
Suggestion: out-of-town
...In general, various things shipped from out of town in trucks and every crucial products wi...
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...s already made this decision, three days Monday, Tuesday, Wednesday only person ...
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..., three days Monday, Tuesday, Wednesday only person can drive odd plate-number ...
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... only person can drive odd plate-number vehicle and other three days even cars c...
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...air filter for world. In conclusion, We can clearly see that gaining price of...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...e causes which will difficult to handle in future. Nevertheless, there are some aspects i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, for example, in conclusion, in general, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96981132075 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69485223177 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637735849057 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4826293991 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0714285714 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9285714286 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104214748609 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0338978019539 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314380003482 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0564165806833 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360998240513 0.056905535591 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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