It is commonly seen that the number of students who are not prefering science subjects at college owing to some problems. This issue is one of the major concerns in recent years across the globe. In this essay I will explain the main reasons and it's effects in the society.
The first and foremost reason for this, indeed the university is collecting the higher amount of fees in many places. In fact, the institution need a huge amount of money for maintain study materials and other miscllenous in the campus so they are collecting high fees.In contrast, the other subjects like engineering and arts do not need such high amount for studying . In this situation many poor students may not affordable to learn science subject. As a result, the majority of students will not select this subject as their major. Moreover, if the candidate select this subject, they need to study too much than other subject. Since medical proper medical knowledge is essential part in this profession, then only they can treat the patient more effectively. Thus, this is clear that due to these reasons many students avoid to enroll science subject.
This issues will adversely affect to the society, the number of medical practitioner will decrease significantly due to less science students in the college. In other words, the mortality rate and diseases will rise in the family and the society by lack of doctor's. Another justification is that many medical college will be closed due to shortage of students, and consequently many employees also will loss their jobs like proferssor, technicians, drivers and so on.This financial crisis fully affect many famailies especially impoverished family.
In conclusion, studying medical subject is falling relatively in many regions across the country, This can be attributed to high fees and excessive study. So it will not only hike the health problems but also economic crisis in the families.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, may, moreover, so, then, thus, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14240506329 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64916996128 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54746835443 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.625480525 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.333333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73333333333 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178130884828 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681281154225 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487210443246 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106270265704 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298100927206 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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