Nowadays online shopping becomes more popular than inshore shopping. Is it a positive or negative development? Give your reasons and examples.
It is true that e-shopping has become more popular due to the arrival of new technology, whereas to purchase from the shop has declined slightly. Although shopping from the internet has many drawbacks, I believe that it is one of the easiest ways to do shopping.
One of the most important benefits of doing shopping from the internet is that one can save time and energy because the customer not require to go to the store and therefore, they can save their valuable time and energy. When someone does purchase from the market, they suppose to spend a whole day. For example, I usually do shopping mostly via online these days so that I can save plenty of time which can use for other work at home. Consequently, the person can easily keep their precious time in internet shopping without going out.
Another key advantage is that people can save their huge amount of money if they do online shopping.
First, no need to spend any extra amount for transportation by purchasing any items from some website. For instance, in my country in India, people spend much on transport to go shopping in the market. Thus, this is clear that online shopping always provides a number of benefits in ones daily life.
However, online shopping some time adversely affect the people, they maybe wait for many days to receive their product. Also, there is chance of damage the product while transferring it. So it is a great impact that the customer who always rely on internet buying.
In conclusion, both ways of shopping have a positive and negative side effect nevertheless, I feel that internet shopping is far better than store buying owing to its greater advantage
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'going', 'gonna'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: going; gonna
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, whereas, while, as to, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80139372822 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48159464585 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560975609756 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9676950879 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4285714286 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6428571429 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155142052913 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554079408705 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539687738832 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0915845225177 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532408479049 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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