Selecting an university subject is a crucial task for students owing to enormous subjects are available these days. Some are of the view that pupils who have their own choices to taking some subjects like arts and technical. Others, however, feel that they should only preferd to learn subjects namely science and technology which will be the most useful in the future career. I am going to discuss the topic from both points of view and then conclude by giving my own opinion.
On the one hand, some people think that other than science and technology, today, students have many alternative subjects are available at campus. Arts and technical courses like politechnic and trade work are inevitable part of the study in many countries.In fact, every students have thier own taste to choosing for everything according to their ability and capacity. To cite an example, if someone would like to become a film actor or actress, painter and cartoonist, they will find a suitable subjects in particular tertiary. Consequently, they can achieve their goal and therefore they will satisfy. Moreover, some students would like to work as a mechanic, plumber or technician and people discover a spectacular outcome in these fields too. Thus, this is clear that not only science and technology are useful but these subjects also needs to consider as better subjects for a fruitful life.
On the other hand, some advocate that subjects like science and technology are the only choices to learn. This is because, it has immense opportunity than other courese. People can earn more and improve the life span of people due to the better treatment with sophisticated equipment. For instances, medical practitioners are really getting huge wages form their quality care. Furthermore, technology also plays a vital role in this modern world. If students enroll this subject, which makes life much easier and faster. Take smart phone as a simple example, the publicity of this gadget is indispensable so in this circumstances students will get a decent job and as a result they can improve the standard of life.
To sum up, although science and technology provide many opportunities in the future, I strongly believe that other subjects also can be esured a quality life these days due to it's wide job availability.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, so, then, therefore, thus, for instance, in fact, in particular, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1927.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07105263158 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68250074544 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547368421053 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2325041983 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.055555556 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1111111111 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.72222222222 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353085656943 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.098367398865 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631670128173 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205663493827 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757881006112 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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