The map revels the possible site for construct a new supermarket in Garlsdon town.
It can be seen from the graph that the total population in Garlsdon is exactly 85, 000. There are two possible sites which namely S 1 and S 2. In case of S 1, which is located north- west part of Garlsdon. Though this town is a country side, it has both railway and main road fragility.
However, the S 2 is sited in the middle of the town which is adjacent to southern part of the town. This location is look like quite busiest area and it is surrounded by commercial area where no traffic zone too. Interestingly , the vast majority of this area is occupied with many residents especially either side of site 2. There is an industrial area which faces north and south. When travelling from North- West side of Garlsdon to Hindon will take only 12 km, and the population is only 10, 000. At the same time, to reach Bronsdon will take 16 km ,and the population is 15, 000. In contrast, the distance from this town to Cransdon will take about 25 km and the population is relatively little higher.
Overall, it is clear that S 2 is the best place to build a supermarket than S 1 because it has many facilities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... both railway and main road fragility. However, the S 2 is sited in the middle...
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Suggestion: quite the busiest
...of the town. This location is look like quite busiest area and it is surrounded by commercial...
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...where no traffic zone too. Interestingly , the vast majority of this area is occup...
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Suggestion: ,
... time, to reach Bronsdon will take 16 km ,and the population is 15, 000. In contra...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, so, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 978.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 223.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38565022422 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5285203536 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565022421525 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.6973918685 43.030603864 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.2307692308 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1538461538 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.30769230769 5.23603664747 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213213733894 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086315746274 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129214916373 0.0843802449381 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191968277397 0.15604864568 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.181452795858 0.0819641961636 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.2329268293 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 11.4140731707 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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