Nowadays, children are engaged with variety of activities in their daily life. Some people assert that certain spare time activity should be related to study oriented, unless they are ruining their own quality time.
I firmly agree with this statement due to some well grounded reasons.
To begin with, the free time activity of children will different from person to person. When they focus on study related activities in their career, certainly they can achieve their goal easily. For example, if a student have interest in subject of history, his or her hobby should be related to history like creating historical exhibition, visiting museum and collection of antique. Consequently, they can not only achieve their ambition but also can save time from doing unnecessary activities with electronic gadgets such as watching TV and playing video games.
Another justification is that although physical activity is a vital part of every child, the study related activity is the key to success in academic career. This is because, in order to get a decent job, it is very essential have a greater grade from school or college. So when the children show an interest in reading books, magazines and newspapers during their extra time, surely will definitely get a spectacular outcome. To cite an example, pupil spend their important time on useless activity certainly they cannot reach their destination easily. Hence, parents and teachers should inculcate the children to read books and articles at early period of life.
To conclude, leisure time activity plays a pivotal role for every child especially education related activities so it not only help their studies but also can automatically create reading habits among children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, if, so, well, for example, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28158844765 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5907451198 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620938628159 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5600863104 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.538461538 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178299835131 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692195814327 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376316203245 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110190487442 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354381135844 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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