It has been observed that most of the students at University do not choose science to study.
Why this problem happens?
What are the effects on society?
Nowadays vast majority of college students do not prefer science as their majors. This is because science studies in general are time consuming courses and the outcomes of this situation are lacking to have advance technology and innovation in society and having bad economy.
Science studies requires high dedication and a great amount of time. This is because, learning and excelling on science is extermely important for societies as many developments in the modern world lean on science. Therefore, when it comes to picking a field in the university, many college goers do not prefer to be admitted to such kind of studies as they are highly crucial and learning comes with great responsibilities and sacrifaces. For instance, according to a recent research from the Guardian Newspaper, more than half of the students in the UK are shaping their major decision regarding to how many hours in a week they want to spend a time by studiying, and yet the majority picking courses which are not consume their leisure time. This is why students are not kneen on choosing science.
As an outcome of this, societies are lacking to have qualified engineers and scientists and this situation make some societies with providing technologies from outside resources and as an outcome not having a strong economy. Since the advanced technologies are vital in the modern world, not having innovative solutions and improvements makes countries depend on external sources with importing high quality devices from abroad. For example, Pakistan does not provide important amount of funds to its universities science department, and since the above mentiod reason effect students decisions to not select science, Pakistan as a country having hard times to advanced its technology therefore, importaning many important gadgets from the other countries.
To conclude, although science studies are vital to learn, many students do not prefer to do their majors on this field. This is because these studies requires a great amount of devoution. As a consuquence, this pressing problem pricing countires with having less-advanced techologies and bad economies.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'recent research'.
Suggestion: recent research
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'consumed'.
Suggestion: consumed
... majority picking courses which are not consume their leisure time. This is why student...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in general, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1812.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34513274336 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83244217189 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504424778761 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.8274490997 49.4020404114 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.384615385 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0769230769 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236635198715 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105185718426 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696962804851 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167351809768 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493770344224 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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